Prompt
Help us work on the first landing screen according to the goals and materials below. [input] Goals and usage situations: On the first landing screen, I want to resolve any blockages and decide my next course of action. Resources to review: Service overview and first actions Conditions and Constraints: Please proceed based on the provided data, and mark any missing facts as requiring confirmation. Previous attempts and records: This is my first attempt. Please proceed from the parts that can be confirmed in the current data. [Key points to check in this topic] Let your readers know who your service is for and connect action with the actual value you provide. [Results to be created this time] Read the provided draft and select the omissions, contradictions, and lack of evidence that prevent you from achieving your goal in order of greatest impact. Please include the original text location, problem, impact on readers, and minimum revisions. Don't treat simple differences in taste as errors, but be sure to identify what needs to be fixed before rewriting the entire thing. [Working Principle] Write according to the actual conditions of your readers and channel. Do not include unfounded figures, reviews, time reduction, or performance guarantees for hooking. Compare product policies with materials provided. If there is no input that will change the results, ask only the necessary questions first and proceed with the parts that can be confirmed with data. [Completion criteria] Make sure that each problem you point out has textual support and that the amendments do not change the original meaning. Distinguish between the basis for the outcome, remaining uncertainties, and next actions, and mark only what has actually been confirmed as complete.